J_F_0705

Recently opened and quickly read some chapters ~ So funny to read something I wrote almost 2 years ago :D It's so light and reminds me of one of those - teenage, disney like, magical movies *-* I am just happy that I managed to write this story till the end ~ ❤
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/178269480

Thalassa_Brytaye

For some reason WattPad isn't letting me reply to comments in your book, so I am just going to reply to one here, hope you don't mind. ;)
          My point, when I said that the love in your love story threw me off, is that in order to be true to Loki's character, any romance between him and another character must be long in the developing and very resisted at first by him. Unless he is using romance to manipulate someone, Loki is, by nature, extremely averse to becoming 'sentimental' about anyone. So, yeah, romance can work! I am not saying it can't or that in a Loki love-story you shouldn't have love. XD That would be silly. What I am saying is that any love should, if it is true to his character, take a lot longer than a few chance meetings to develop. Loki does not love except - usually - against his will. Think of Thor and Odin. He wanted to hate Thor, but he couldn't. He wanted to hate Odin, but he couldn't. He wanted to forget Frigga, but he couldn't because he loved her too much. Loki hates how emotional he really is and fights that side of himself constantly.
          I'll stop there, because now I am going into a speech XD. Point in brief: Yup, in a love story you need love. However - in a LOKI love story, you need long-tested and forestalled love for Loki to remain true to himself. :)

J_F_0705

@Thalassa_Brytaye thank you I am glad you gave me some advice for at least the first 3 chapters ^_^ <3
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Thalassa_Brytaye

To answer both: Yes, it sounds weird since I haven't a clue what happens next, but since you know, I will trust that you know what you're doing and I am just a poor, helpless, clueless reader XP Though, seriously, I do love your story. There are places with Loki where you just hit the nail on the head and it baffles me how real he feels. <3
            Also - sure thing! I will remember that. ;D And I love the way you think! Hope we can converse more in future.
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J_F_0705

@Thalassa_Brytaye Btw you can write me in messages (pm) XDDD just in case... I love the way you think :D 
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J_F_0705

So I started another story about Loki my favorite character  Hope you like it... Pls don't judge strictly I just have some ideas for this new fanfiction and decided to share it with you ^_^ Also the publishing of chapters may take a long time cause I still have exams...but the 2nd chapter will be published today a bit later ))
          
          Thanks for attention!!!

J_F_0705

@Thalassa_Brytaye  Awww thanks!!! I'm happy to hear that xD ❤
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Thalassa_Brytaye

@J_F_0705 
            I look forward to reading it! :D Great to find another Loki-lover. XD Good luck with your fan-fic!
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JoshuaRobinson056

Thank you so much for following me! Hope your having a quality quarantine  if you've got some spare time I would love some feedback on my piece titled "Chitters in Bottled Glass" tell me what you think! 

J_F_0705

@JoshuaRobinson056 honestly nothing to thank for))) 
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J_F_0705

@JoshuaRobinson056 Whenever I have time I'll check it out))) Thank you also for following me.
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midnightdawn99

thank you for the follow :) I really hope you check out my book - "We Were Once In Love "!! Please feel free to vote , comment and give me feedback ♡ Have a wonderful day /night !!

J_F_0705

@midnightdawn99 Thank you too for the follow :) Sure when I have free time and a bit mood for reading I'll check out your book!
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