JabaThePegasus

Does anyone know what happened to the fanfiction "Yours, Betty"??

once-upon-a-moon

Thank youuuu!

once-upon-a-moon

@unknownIx_ thanks again. Could you tell me where you read it up to?.. and how I could improve to make my writing better for readers to read.. hehe. Thank youuuu!.
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once-upon-a-moon

I have seen you've voted on my story, the dragon Secret, im just wondering as you didn't go any further. Is there any improvements that could be made?

once-upon-a-moon

@unknownIx_ oh lol.. never knew you found my book before, I'm still grateful you are still on it tho. Thanks bro 
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once-upon-a-moon

@unknownIx_ thank you. You are a true reader randomly finding my book and reading it because you want to. I'm very delighted that you actually read it! ❤️
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JabaThePegasus

@unknownIx_ Ah, yes. I actually read further but voted on the first chapter so I didn't lose the book. I actually really like the story. I don't read fantasy that much but I'm getting into it because fantasy is an interesting genre. I really liked how you detailed your chapters to where I could get a visual of what was going on. Your vocabulary was fresh and sophisticated at most parts, too. I read a few chapters and it's honestly very good. If there's anything else I feel needed improving, I'll let you know :)
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Netshaly

Thanks for the follow

JabaThePegasus

@Netshaly Yes indeed, I will let you know!
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Netshaly

@Netshaly Oh! Glad to hear you like so far. I look forward to reading what you think about the new chapter.
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JabaThePegasus

@Netshaly No problem!! I am falling in love with Dark Girls Can’t Be Lesbian! It's such an amazing story!
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xobribriiii

Heyy how is it going bro lmao

JabaThePegasus

@Cuppyy HELLO! It's going great!! Wow, it's been forever!
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