@unknownIx_ Ah, yes. I actually read further but voted on the first chapter so I didn't lose the book. I actually really like the story. I don't read fantasy that much but I'm getting into it because fantasy is an interesting genre. I really liked how you detailed your chapters to where I could get a visual of what was going on. Your vocabulary was fresh and sophisticated at most parts, too. I read a few chapters and it's honestly very good. If there's anything else I feel needed improving, I'll let you know :)