JackDaWeb

Sup, everyone. No chapter for today because I'm revisiting old chapters. My OCD got to me again, so I'm going back to change some capitalization to keep things consistent. There won't be any big changes, so there's no need to reread. I'm just doing this because my brain can't stand the fact that a certain word is capitalized in one chapter when it shouldn't be :')

JackDaWeb

Sup, everyone. No chapter for today because I'm revisiting old chapters. My OCD got to me again, so I'm going back to change some capitalization to keep things consistent. There won't be any big changes, so there's no need to reread. I'm just doing this because my brain can't stand the fact that a certain word is capitalized in one chapter when it shouldn't be :')

Frost_Valzard

Hello author i just got a question when will guy show up to look for Velzard or be curious about what Velzard has been doing this entire time and what she has been doing in Tempest because she has not returned to the Frost continent for a long time or taken a visit wouldn't he send mizeri or rain to check up on her by now?

JackDaWeb

@Frost_Valzard He knows it's best not to provoke her at all. Guy will not visit Tempest on the grounds of curiosity about Velzard's actions. He will still visit soon when he learns that Rimuru named the Primordials.
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JackDaWeb

What's good, readers? After a few days of editing and compiling, I've finally fixed all the inconsistencies in the story and enhanced the flow of events. I was surprised to see just how long this fic really is. By compiling the entire work into one document, I was able to get its word count, which was an astonishing 180k. Crazy. 
          
          Anyway, once my schedule frees up, I'll start on Chapter 35, which covers the aftermath of the council meeting, Rimuru getting something nice for Velzard, and his visitation to Lubelius. That is all for now. Thank you!

Boom_pixel

thats awesome. looking forward for the next chapter 
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JackDaWeb

Greetings, everyone. Apologies for not having posted a new chapter in a while. School is currently being a bitch, and I've had little time to focus on writing the next chapter. However, that doesn't mean I haven't done anything related to the story.
          
          Over the past days, I've gone back to the beginning of the fic and began compiling every chapter into one document (I'm currently at Chapter 13). In said document, I've taken the time to meticulously revise the story. I've rewritten certain lines to make the story flow better, added or changed a few bits of dialogue and monologue to enrich the story, and edited a few plot points to get rid of a few holes I noticed. The overall story remains the same, so there is no need to reread everything from the beginning.
          
          I mainly did this to quell my OCD. The newer chapters are a far cry above the older ones in terms of overall quality. This is because I took the time to better understand how to write and all that stuff during my long hiatus. It felt wrong for me to see that level of quality in the newer chapters.
          
          Anyway, once I'm finished with all the revisions, I'll be back to writing Chapter 35. Thank you, as always!

JackDaWeb

@Unogus-san I just now finished posting all the revised chapters. Proofreading everything certainly took more time than I thought it would. Nonetheless, I'm glad the rest of the book, especially the earlier chapters, is of the same quality as the newer chapters in terms of pacing, flow, wording, and all that.
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Paradox_334

@JackDaWeb? Oh I will look forward to it
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JackDaWeb

@Paradox_334 yes it will. I'm still compiling all the chapters 
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