Jack Eclipse

@raina_grare ur welcome

@Vavoaz ok i might of contradict myself a few times here but that just shows i'm human as humans live go contradict themselves take my advice and don't get better, Okay?

@Vavoaz it also has some spelling errors of course dude do u know why long running
             movie franchise don't give an obvious title put a complicated title that doesn't reveal in the first chapter this not a movie  take your time⏳. So  you've got a good title give u that but don't be so cliche  dude and don't use life story when it comes to the romance parts it suqs

@Vavoaz  the story suqs teavon too much on a * high horse* story developing too fast not much dialog just the narrator and common such a lame awakening i can endless critique about that chapter