JackHusk

@Coraaa_x3 Sorry if it's a late reply, but I'm not really good in feedbacks or stuff like that :) All I can say is that you need to separate long paragraphs if a topic shifts from one to another :D
          	
          	@EmJbookreader Yeah I've tried writing an actual book, but writing a Drarry one would probably make my mind spin. It'll take a long while before I can start making it since I have two ongoing stories on my other account.

JackHusk

@Coraaa_x3 Sorry if it's a late reply, but I'm not really good in feedbacks or stuff like that :) All I can say is that you need to separate long paragraphs if a topic shifts from one to another :D
          
          @EmJbookreader Yeah I've tried writing an actual book, but writing a Drarry one would probably make my mind spin. It'll take a long while before I can start making it since I have two ongoing stories on my other account.