JackHusk

@Coraaa_x3 Sorry if it's a late reply, but I'm not really good in feedbacks or stuff like that :) All I can say is that you need to separate long paragraphs if a topic shifts from one to another :D
          	
          	@EmJbookreader Yeah I've tried writing an actual book, but writing a Drarry one would probably make my mind spin. It'll take a long while before I can start making it since I have two ongoing stories on my other account.

JackHusk

@Coraaa_x3 Sorry if it's a late reply, but I'm not really good in feedbacks or stuff like that :) All I can say is that you need to separate long paragraphs if a topic shifts from one to another :D
          
          @EmJbookreader Yeah I've tried writing an actual book, but writing a Drarry one would probably make my mind spin. It'll take a long while before I can start making it since I have two ongoing stories on my other account.

Coraaa_x3

Heey I was wondering if you could have a look at my story and give it a little read? Would like some feedback of what I've wrote in it so far.. http://www.wattpad.com/story/5629183-these-skin-and-bones and if you dont that's okay too, thanks for reading this :-)