JackMat98

It's been a while since I was last on here. Guess you could say that I have had writers block, combined with me simply being busy with other things. But I've decided to come back and give the Explorers of Sky remaster another go. 
          	
          	However, it means I am deleting the one I already started because there is a major change I want to make. That being the fact that the "player" shares the same first name as me. I keep like this is a bit too much like a self insert in my opinion. I know the point of the games are that you are a human turned into a Pokemon and will most likely name yourself after the player. Though, I do want to do it in this different way. i may keep the player character as a Riolu or I may change the species. One potential idea I may recycle from the Super Mystery Dungeon story I tried before but deleted is having the player and partner be the same species. Maybe they'll both be Riolu, maybe both be Scorbunny (or even Raboot, as I prefer them over Scorbunny slightly) or a different species completely.

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JackMat98

It's been a while since I was last on here. Guess you could say that I have had writers block, combined with me simply being busy with other things. But I've decided to come back and give the Explorers of Sky remaster another go. 
          
          However, it means I am deleting the one I already started because there is a major change I want to make. That being the fact that the "player" shares the same first name as me. I keep like this is a bit too much like a self insert in my opinion. I know the point of the games are that you are a human turned into a Pokemon and will most likely name yourself after the player. Though, I do want to do it in this different way. i may keep the player character as a Riolu or I may change the species. One potential idea I may recycle from the Super Mystery Dungeon story I tried before but deleted is having the player and partner be the same species. Maybe they'll both be Riolu, maybe both be Scorbunny (or even Raboot, as I prefer them over Scorbunny slightly) or a different species completely.

JackMat98

So I think I've decided I'm going to give the Explorers Remaster another shot. However, I've decided I want to try and make one, very significant change to it and this is something that wouldn't be possible in the main game.
          
          I will be making the partner a Scorbunny and their personality is going to be different to the in game partner, but I believe I can make it work still. As for the hero/player I'm keeping them as a Riolu (though don't know if I should keep them named as myself or base off one of my OC's(the Scorbunny is based off an OC too)

Mastep1

Hello I was wondering if you where going to make a second part for lost and tortured spirts because this is like the 5th or 6th time I’ve read it and it’s really good.

Mastep1

@JackMat98 ok no problem just wondering
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JackMat98

Probably not, because I only wrote it for part on an rp server I'm in.
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Mastep1

Tormented
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JackMat98

So I have decided that I'm going to be deleting the two incomplete stories on my profile (being the remastered Explorers of Sky and Super Mystery Dungeon: Aura Allies). This is due to having some writers block. I may return to them again on a later day and start fresh.

JackMat98

So after thinking about it as of recent, I've decided I want to do a remastered version of the "Explorers of Sky" story. It'll hopefully be more descriptive and include more character to it.
          
          What I plan to include:
          -More description
          -Tweaks to some personalities
          -A 2nd partner that joins the main hero and partner
          -Post game events included

JackMat98

So since the completion of my Explorers of Sky Story, I've been trying to think of what my next story should be. The two ideas I have were either a continuation of EOS (i.e. Post game story) or a story based on Super Mystery Dungeon, and right now I'm leaning more towards the Super Mystery Dungeon story. However, I might make it a sort of crossover with the Explorers story to show both Jack & Sparky in the events of Super.

JackMat98

If any of you want to give me feedback on my story or to just simply talk with me, you can do so here.

JackMat98

@Fanboi101 Well I'll try my best at it. After all, this is my first time writing a fully fledged story.
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JackMat98

So basically, you want me to describe the locations in more detail?
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