Jack_A_Rivers

Was wondering if I should completely rewrite Forbidden Love? 
          	
          	I would keep the idea of each chapter, but would be fixing a lot of things and maybe even taking suggestions!
          	
          	Any ideas?

Shammu315

Hello... Audin dear,
          Thank you so much for the read and votes in my book Mindfuck. It is full of my scribblings, it needs a stronger heart to read all of them. You did it mate. Once again thank you so much. To return my gratitude I am gonna read urs and give u feedback.. Have a great day
          
          
          Lots of love
          Shameem

Jack_A_Rivers

Thank you so much! I really didn’t need that but thank you!! 
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Pat_is_positive

I really like your story, "Forbidden love," it's well written and has a nice flow. :) I hope you have a good rest of your day, you deserve so much goodness in your life! 
          
          With kindness, 
          
          Your club partner Pat ♡♡ :) 

Pat_is_positive

Of course! :) ♡♡
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Jack_A_Rivers

Aww thanks. I appreciate the kindness and having someone different actually read my story is amazing. 
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