My Last Cypher

No that was good.
            
            I love Bear, his eating habits are gonna be a running theme through the book, and Nora trains him over time. He is her loyal animal companion.
            
            Nora has to be my favorite character( for obvious reasons) but my second favorite and the one I love writing about is Chalcedony. She’s the fun loving, fruity, and adventurous  but also extremely knowledgeable with Gem history and artifacts. 
            
            Humanity and Gems living together is a huge part of the story and seeing how after mankind is influenced by them.  Even in the past before Era 3 they influenced history ( the European explorers  never  conquered Central and South America because the Gem monsters kept them away. So those countries don’t exist)
            
            
            Not spoiling much but the main running conflict in this story(besides the Remnant) is Steven’s reluctance to let Nora get involved with Gem matters, especially when they deal with his mother’s actions and Nora’s growing powers. He wants to keep her from following in his footsteps but Nora sees it as him hiding things from her and suppressing her inborn gift.
            
            

Oof that was longer than i thought...

Well i can promise as long as I remember to check wattpad for any updates I'll be reading this any chance I get! And I'd have to say one of my favorite things about this is how I can easily believe this could be canon to the actual series. And my favorite character is Nora's bear (Yes, it's the bear of all characters, I was already loving him but he won me over when he went after Greg's sandwich and the fridge lol) and my favorite concept would be how you made some real world struggles easily fit in to this universe where the free gems began to migrate to earth and live among humans. I'm not sure what I'd like to see in future chapters so I'll leave the story planning to you, But I know I'll like it either way because the rest of the story has me drawn to it and I don't believe I could be disappointed with it if it keeps up the way it does. Can't wait for future updates!

You won’t have to wait too long 

And I love how you do it your own way, it has a bit of that realism feel that the show could never fully capture, and i love it, I can't wait to read the next one when it comes out.

Thank you so much. I wanted to write it where it captures the spirit of the series with all the emotions that went with it but I still write it my own way.
            
            I usually update frequently and I’m currently writing the next chapter

thanks

@Sihsdhihhsvafhig 1. its not horrid, as a matter of fact it actually has a lot of potential for more of a story to it if you want to try to add to it, but even if you don't it's still pretty good the way it is, and 2. yea i feel like it relates yule almost perfectly

i know it is horrid, but....if you read Charis_14's books, can you sort of reate it to Yule?