Jack_Fandom

Im just gonna say it
          	If youRe a virgin writing a sex scene for your book—
          	I t  s h o w s
          	Idk what it is, but the way itS written leads me to believe this is something you hope for not something that has ever genuinely happened??
          	Bc not all sex is slow and passionate or whatever, it can be quick and rough, heck it could be drunk n sloppy
          	But yall gotta...research bc it shows
          	And itS weird to read 

Jack_Fandom

Im just gonna say it
          If youRe a virgin writing a sex scene for your book—
          I t  s h o w s
          Idk what it is, but the way itS written leads me to believe this is something you hope for not something that has ever genuinely happened??
          Bc not all sex is slow and passionate or whatever, it can be quick and rough, heck it could be drunk n sloppy
          But yall gotta...research bc it shows
          And itS weird to read 

Jack_Fandom

People get really mad when I point out super obvious plot holes???
          I could understand an accidental continuity error but if itS RIGHT THERE
          ILl point it out because??? I want everyone to benefit as writers???????? Fight me

Jack_Fandom

Your character can be a nerd/geek without being in love with Star Wars, Star Trek, or Lord of The Rings aight?
          All of those to me
          Completely SUCK
          But IM still a nerd/geek
          So
          LetS try being more realistic instead of encouraging stereotypes 

_Ashryver_

I’m trying hard not to scream because I love Star Trek. But yea you can still be a nerd without liking them.
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Jack_Fandom

Me: *reads 3 chapters of a story*
          Me: *is now livid and bent*
          Me: *might just murder the author for being..lowkey so dumb-*

Jack_Fandom

That sounds mean
            But when you write a story where everything is contradictory to itself and you have not so helpful side characters or you have unreasonable actions takig place
            I’m gonna get annoyed and I will say something-
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