Im just gonna say it
If youRe a virgin writing a sex scene for your book—
I t s h o w s
Idk what it is, but the way itS written leads me to believe this is something you hope for not something that has ever genuinely happened??
Bc not all sex is slow and passionate or whatever, it can be quick and rough, heck it could be drunk n sloppy
But yall gotta...research bc it shows
And itS weird to read
Im just gonna say it
If youRe a virgin writing a sex scene for your book—
I t s h o w s
Idk what it is, but the way itS written leads me to believe this is something you hope for not something that has ever genuinely happened??
Bc not all sex is slow and passionate or whatever, it can be quick and rough, heck it could be drunk n sloppy
But yall gotta...research bc it shows
And itS weird to read
Random
Can I get a story where a character doesnT have a screwed up background but still becomes the villain????
LetS try being realistic my guys
Not everyone with a bad upbringing goes on to do bad stuff
People get really mad when I point out super obvious plot holes???
I could understand an accidental continuity error but if itS RIGHT THERE
ILl point it out because??? I want everyone to benefit as writers???????? Fight me
Your character can be a nerd/geek without being in love with Star Wars, Star Trek, or Lord of The Rings aight?
All of those to me
Completely SUCK
But IM still a nerd/geek
So
LetS try being more realistic instead of encouraging stereotypes
Guys IM just saying
Basing your character on the single fact they self harm for the sake of moving forward your romance plot doesnt make your story okay
ItS not cool to romanticize self harm
This has been my TEDTalk
That sounds mean
But when you write a story where everything is contradictory to itself and you have not so helpful side characters or you have unreasonable actions takig place
I’m gonna get annoyed and I will say something-