Cool, I found your story through my recommendations and I read some of it.
The first chapter/prologue is pretty well done, nice job.
But it is sad seeing that it's been more then 2 years since you had last updated your book which disappoints me a tad bit.
Regardless of the reason however, it is still a great story and I'll be reading more of it.
Have a good day mate, hope ya do well in your personal life.
:)
-Whom_is_this