JacksonNovel
By far It is good and chp 7 and 8 their backstory are mid nothing that interesting but the character of last chapter seem like the chosen one
JacksonNovel
Cool05guy2000
What do you think of the God hand characters?
Cool05guy2000
How was my book so far?
Cool05guy2000
Thanks for the follow
JacksonNovel
@Cool05guy2000 the second godhand backstory are sad but it is normal to her for look down humans bc of the trauma she went through but I think the appearance will be good if you add some glowing thing on her missing eye ball socket cuz it will represented that she is predict the future