An amateur writing trying to make a book, I decided to come here for reliable per-chapter feedback. I generally take an interest in magic-and-tech settings, like what can be found in the Final Fantasy series, and yin-and-yang symbology. I'm also interested in personal and political themes. I will say upfront that my stories and characters are all furry, for obvious reasons, but I hope it won't get in the way of your enjoyment, as it certainly won't get in the way of my writing. My characters mean more to me than what they appear as. Thank you in advance for any criticism you send my way, the more specific the better.