yutaaone
this was the best book ever. Come back and write more, ignore my old comments
mykahx
@Alikatt15 Let's not sugar coat it.
Alikatt15
but why not? it is better to tell somebody their story is somewhat good than telling them it sucks if you got a problem with how they write their story why dont you help them huh?
SierraDawnLarson
Okay...like you should seriously listen in English class. That story was so baaad. What was the point of it? Just....take. it. down.
Alikatt15
good job but try to use spelling and reasonable words okay?