
secret_singer705
So i read the first chapter of kiss me. Its good. Need to fix somethings not much. I'm not one to judge either. I'm just helping.

secret_singer705
Its how your sentences are put together. Its no big deal it'll just confuse the reader.
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Jade72987
@secret_singer705 It's ok I need pointers anyway. I know I spelt some words wrong but what else do I need to work on?
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