Jade72987

I may or may not finish my book Different isn't so bad. I lost my notebook again and I can't find it anywhere. I might start two new stories though. 

secret_singer705

So i read the first chapter of kiss me. Its good. Need to fix somethings not much. I'm not one to judge either. I'm just helping. 

secret_singer705

Its how your sentences are put together. Its no big deal it'll just confuse the reader. 
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Jade72987

@secret_singer705 It's ok I need pointers anyway. I know I spelt some words wrong but what else do I need to work on?
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secret_singer705

Hey. I'm Ananda prefer Ana. Nice to meet you. If you need help let me know. Welcome to wattpad btw. 

secret_singer705

@jasper72987 its no problem um can i get your number or something make it easier to help out...
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