Thankyou so much for your encouragement, I don’t think I ever would of gotten this far without seeing everyone’s feedback to keep me going. This story originally was a “I have this story idea” that I told my friend when we were drunk hahaha she was so invested she was mad I didn’t have the physical book already to give to her I didn’t start writing till a year after that night but comments including yours have made a massive difference to keep me going. The further I get, the more comfortable I get with writing and the characters so I think I will go back and edit the start of the book to clean it up a bit later on