My honest opinion on ur book is that the general idea of it is really put together. Some parts do connect with the reader while some are a bit off in the sense that everything seems all well constructed when she's just 17.
I would have liked to read more description on how she felt during different moments and also her surroundings.
And a bit fast passed for the first chapter, a cliffhanger or thriller at the end would make it more worth reading to the readers.
But all in all, this is just an honest opinion from me to u, stating facts based on what I think which means ur free to think otherwise and that's okay.
I like the idea you have in your book.
But I would like to see more descriptions about anything and everything, especially her brothers when they come to catch her(how they look, seem to feel and how much she loathes them)
Sorry if this was too long
