Hello, everyone! This is my first post and I wanted to say that I'm rewriting my book called Shooting stars due to the massive cringe I felt while reading it.I also watched YouTube videos to help get better at it and it seems I made my character into a mary sue. I gave little freedom to my Mc because of making them human but the powers stay for a reason.The reason? for the plot.I felt like I've been typing to much 'I say' and 'they say' too much.Keep in mind that I'm still a newbie to making stories. For the love interests?I already planned who it'll be... which is all of them so I need suggestions from my readers to know who they want to end up with. Anyways thx for reading this if you did ! I'll be changing mc's personality to avoid them from being a mary sue.
