Auriel_Ora

Hello and nice to meet you. I read your stories and think they are very well written, descriptive, and engaging but a minor problem that I think should be addressed is indenting and placing in paragraphs.
          
          A huge chunk of text is overwhelming for readers and lots of writers I notice suffer from that.
          
          Other than that, keep up the good work and have a nice day.
          
          Don't hesitate to ask me any advice since all writers should stick together. 
          
          Thank you for taking your time reading this.

Auriel_Ora

@Jadeausten I hope we do too. I'll look forward to seeing all the works you create.
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Jadeausten

Absolutely not! I’m halfway through so far and I’m enjoying it a lot! It’s a pleasure to have you drop by, really. I hope we can be great friends! 
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Auriel_Ora

You mean Thirst? I'll admit that's a confusing story mixed with a hidden meaning that no one seems to get. I hope it's okay or passing for you and you're not forcing yourself to read it.
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citrusandsugga

hey jade! It's me, Maria. Im not sure if you remember me because we used to talk a lot about MC with Chrysa and Natalia. I'd love if we could talk again! I miss you :,)

Jadeausten

We need to talk more omg
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Jadeausten

OF COURSE I REMEMBER YOU! 
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