I'm rewriting the start of my original story ! I've named it finally its called Don't wait, save yourself and I'm changing the whole flow I hated it! It was written how I was taught to write in school and that's not how I write sooooooo I don't care. If you wanna check it out feel free it's kinda fantasy adventure themed but I'm fixing it so just bare with :) I'm excited to fix this because I think it was a super cool idea. Hope you read and enjoy~Jw