@meggymoo4321 I thought with the last couple chapters maybe need expanded in details and background story for them, also I think it might be time to increase her relationship with Edward and her coming out of the Abuse somehow, Charlie gets caught, something happens to him, she moves out etc. It is still good and i'm always looking out for the notification to say you updated i'm just trying to help you think what to write next since you asked your question what to write next :)