Jae_Nika

I’m actually taking a course on creative writing and one of the advice I got was to divide my acts into scenes and constantly add rising interest.  That’s why the pace of the story keeps getting faster…
          	
          	I’m wondering if it’s still coherent.
          	
          	Also I’m tackling darker topics like human selfishness.  Hopefully a person who interacts with jjk can handle darker themes???  I mean, the source material is pretty dark

Jae_Nika

I’m actually taking a course on creative writing and one of the advice I got was to divide my acts into scenes and constantly add rising interest.  That’s why the pace of the story keeps getting faster…
          
          I’m wondering if it’s still coherent.
          
          Also I’m tackling darker topics like human selfishness.  Hopefully a person who interacts with jjk can handle darker themes???  I mean, the source material is pretty dark

Jae_Nika

Got my first bad review of my story.   I guess I’m a bit unsure of how to respond but it was bound to happen at least once!  I’m happy for the review but it’s feels kinda pointless because it didn’t tell me how to improve but just said my story was meh…. I guess I’d feel better if the comment was a criticism more than a ‘put down’ if ykwim

Jae_Nika

In working on ATD me and the JJk fandom page have a love hate relationship.
          
          I go in there looking for one piece of information very specific information and I find it (usually very quickly) but never before I end up reliving the deaths of some of my favorite characters! TTTTT
          
          The new chapters will be coming out a bit slower though because jjk season 2 has a lot of plot important things in it so I end up running back and forth a lot

Jae_Nika

Update:
          
          For those who were wondering what I was up to : I just graduated from high school!!!!!
          
          I’ve been pretty busy on and off ever since but things should slow down very soon!
          
          No I have not forgotten “After The Divorce”. I’ll be right back as soon as possible