Jaguar_a_friend

I'm about to start writing from Saturday(maybe Friday, it depends on how busy I'll be with my studies)
          	Wait up...

genuinelyloved

hiii, I'd love it if you could take a look at my work too. thanks in advance!!
          
          This is not just a collection of poems—this is a masterpiece, where your heart learns to understand the essence of your life, and will make you think greater possibilities. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/370321605?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ahmahri

genuinelyloved

thank you for your thoughtful feedback. 
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Jaguar_a_friend

@genuinelyloved Well, first I have to admit... this is GREAT. And you weren't exaggerating on the "essence of one's life" ans "think of greater possibilities"
            But I have to say...at some little and really minor lines, your rhythm drops a bit and I think it needs a little bit of edit and reconsideration
            But rather than that. Anything else was really good
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Sherin750

Hello thank you for the vote :) 

Sherin750

@Jaguar_a_friend ofcourse you won’t disappoint anyone....keep hope alive author 
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Jaguar_a_friend

@Sherin750 Oh thanks
            I hope I won't disappoint you in the future
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Sherin750

Your poems are also so good author, especially the title was awesome…
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MimaykReads

Hi!! I'd love to know your opinion on my poetry collection!! 

Jaguar_a_friend

@MimaykReads oh don't thank me... thank your confidence and your abilities to write such great poems
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MimaykReads

Aw you don't know how happy that makes me!! Thank you so much for the kind words ❤️
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Jaguar_a_friend

@MimaykReads hello there!
            I just read about half of it and... WOW girl. The simile, personification, how pure and "deep from your heart" you wrote them just left my jaw opened. Poetical and soulful. Wish to see from you more
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