No....I'd like to thank YOU for writing The Tired Villainess. Reading it was fun and refreshing. There's some plot holes here and there but I'm sure you could improve and handle that.
Arlo, being the 'different' system as he is, cant help much but I'm sure there's a reason for that. I mean, there's no system shop, system space, nor points received after every world. It's interesting so I still wonder how she would go back to her original world without accumulating points and all. Or does she just have to to go through a lot, and I mean A LOT, of worlds? Arlo didnt say anything specific at the start after all so it's a mystery.
For the ML....I dont have anything to say because I'm sure you already have your plans for him and just thinking of a way to make the plot better.
And finally, Lihua...like any other MC, she's perfect and talented but it makes sense as someone who made a company just by herself. What made her different is her personality as she has a unique sense of humor and is more sociable than other MCs. Although I can say that she's like that (sociable) because as someone who started from the bottom to make a company, you need it...but as someone who came from a family full of...negativities....it come out as a mask for her true self which she only showed to 'him' that she mention at the start of the story.
Hmmm.....that's all, I guess. As for the arcs, I'm sure the others already gave their reviews. OwO I hope you update again soon. Take care of yourself and be careful out there. Dont stress yourself too much too. UwU
