Jakubkg

@ thestroneer  no problem

ok your probably right for the gojo part I wanted to try to get like the explnation to the abilitys out of the way early so fight would flow better later but im reading it now myself again and it it feels unnatural so I'm probably going to hold off on any more explanation parts and ill spend a little more time focusing on what there saying to each other and again thanks for the feedback

@ thestroneer  I checked it, besides few grammar mistakes it is rather good. Though if I could advise something then you could try to make the dialogues feel more natural and towards the plot, for some time now gojo have been talking about his abilities and those can be explained as the story goes, or later on. Maybe trying to see similarities or differences in characters talking and comparing hoe they view the world, ( I wont tell you to get straight to philosophy) but just try to imagine how these characters would really interact if they saw each other really. This might be it from me.

@ KoolaidMansCousin  also I forgot about this good one: fate/crimson revalation its on wattpad

@ KoolaidMansCousin  Honestly cant say I have tham many well written ones (they dont compare to TSSoT) but thay are enjoyable. So on the fly:
            
            Hell's redeemer - a spawn x hazbin hotel crossover thats good in my eyes, uts on fanfiction net
            
            Remnants curse breaker - yuji itadori x RWBY on both fanfiction net and AO3 (i think its a good fanfic, but they arent gojng with jjk canon since it came out before shinjuku got serious, also sukuna feels kind of out of character, but it might be just me)
            
            The "S" stands for Hope - worm x superman crossover on space battles
            
            God of War in Westeros - Kratos in Game of Thrones - honestly is good, but is is well written? Not really, just recomending.
            
            Shadow of Teyvat - a 10s user in genshin impact - since I saw you have jjk in your profile... On space battles but propably is on AO3 too
            
            Old blood and Elder blood - witcher x bloodborne (I havent read it yet but it seems promising) on AO3
            
            Re zero: Shadow's Legacy - End of Series (made up) Cid from TEiS x Re zero. - I like it on AO3
            
            My jujutsu kaisen ending. - title speaks for itself, I'm on 1/3 and interested. AO3
            
            Genshin impact: The sharp shooter of Teyvat - RDR2 oc in Genshin impact. I havent read it to the end so its either done or on haitus. Fanfiction net 
            
            King of Calamities - sukuna and uraume x Arknights (it seems propmising but only has like 6 chalter for now)
            
            Cursed king's adventures - sukuna x fate. (Cants day its well written for now, its simply sukuna in fate)
            
            Orarios curse - modulo yuji in danmachi
            
            Blinding black sparks - a jjk oc x nikke ( I havent read it but is ling and ongoing so it must be peak) fanfiction net
            
            El Hechicero mas fuerte en otro mundo - a sukuna x arknights fanfic ( its just a tease of this fic and no chapters yet, also its in hispanic I think so use a translator.) AO3
            
            Does it matter - modulo yuji in freiren ( it just started so only 1 chapter, its also made by the guy from remnants curse breaker) on AO3

@ KoolaidMansCousin  oh nvm you already have these works in your profile

@ Jakubkg  All of you, never mind, I posted it now.

@ Jakubkg  dang, I if any new chapters apeared then I havent seen them yet. Though I will see whats up in your fic and try to give some feedback. But I dont know when.

@Jakubkg hey I want to thank you again for the feedback you gave me on my fic thought im still working on it when part 5 comes out can you tell me what you think thought im still working on it