Jamakool
5k is crazy for my first book... what the hell
Jamakool
Jamakool
im thinking about writing another book, novel whatever you call it
story will be about koyori
male protag again
lab assistant/boyfriend
koyori messing up experiments and stuff, needing help with this and that cause youre her assistant
what are your thoughts
Jamakool
ill write like 2 more chapters of fwmc, put that on hiatus and write the koyori book if this has positive reactions
Jamakool
almost 100 votes on my trash writing what in the fuwafuwa mocomoco
ibi_naminami
@Jamakool i think you write pretty well. Unsolicited advice as it may be, the only thing i can say, and if i remember right, was that on some chapters the pacing was off, things moving by too fast, and scenes changing too quickly. But if i remember right that was only at the beginning. I think the prologue was rushed and it immediately skimmed to the present/future. Thats fine. If this is your first time publishing or writing, it makes sense that you wanted to get to the main points of your story (or whatever the general idea about the story that you were imagining). Its nothing major though. Its still enjoyable by itself. And the later chapters get better. Its just predesposition thats tough. And do i know it. But anyway, ya dun needa worry bout it bud. Just work on your style and eventually the rest will come.
RiyalYuuma
BABAGOON!!!!!!!!
Jamakool
release will either be in the afternoon or evening GMT+8
Jamakool
sorry fellow ruffians
Jamakool
fwmc bau bau
BlankError999
Chapter 2 was posted right? Or did you take it down?