Advise? hmm, well, if you just have started with writing and all, take something that you can relate to. It makes it easier to write from the heart than the mind(:
Also if you want critique, be sure to advertise. Don't spam people's pages though, you get yelled at by ambassador's for that(: If anyone offers, ask. You can also share it on the Share Your Story club, which can be found above in the category clubs(:
need anything else, just post a message on my message board!
xxCayxx