I am writing this critique simply because I am trying to help. I believe your stories could be really good, as you have great ideas. I think where you fail is in the execution of these ideas. Your chapters are all really short, which people do not particularly like (more is better on wattpad). Small chapters also make your story seem hurried. The few details that are given, are details that are not really needed. I think if you take the time to really think about a plot, and details within that plot, such as characters, back story, things to over come, character development, etc. You could really succeed in writing. I would suggest outlining your ideas. You could do it in a simple was with a beginning, middle, and end, or you could do it chapter by chapter. It would also be good to talk out your ideas with a friend and get suggestions and find someone to edit your works. At the moment I would not classify your works as books or novels, maybe short stories, but still lacking in critical details for readers to understand both the plot and characters. The good news is, that you can definitely learn to improve your writing, and you have something that others lack: creativity.
