Jamie Tyrrell

Chapter three of A World Divided In Two is up!

I am a slow writer I admit. Isnt helped by the 3 different stories im writing at the same time so thanks for being patient with me. The next chapter will be about the chracters friendship and how he ends up with the military. If I describe something in too much detail then tell me to get on with the storyline xD hope everybodys new year has started off great :)

Your book is really good so far! The only thing I have for you, is maybe not mention a ton of different places at one time. It can make readers confused. Other than that, it's great!

I really like kingdom bloodshed 

The prologue for a story (Kingdom Bloodshed) has just been published. Its just so people could have a quick look at it and see what could be changed before I take it down to fix any mistakes again. Helpful comments means better writing :)
          

I've unpublished the parts I've written so I could restart again. It turned out differently then I planned, but I'm also working on another story set in a fantasy world. if you love action, adventure, gore and a bit or romance then this story might be worth checking.

Hi all, my first message out. Just to notify that the 2nd part is being completed soon, I've made sure to double check for spelling mistakes and grammer. As you might realise the story I'm writing isn't based on just the views of one character but of many, so if anybody feels like commenting on what sort of character I should make and add then that would be appreciated.