Hey again✨
As promised, I'm following-up to my previous announcement with soem things I'd like to change, but still get your opnion on.
No matter if you have read the whole thing 5 times, or barely read a few chapters before dropping it, I'd liek to hear your thoughts if you have the time to leave them.
My concerns go as it follows:
- Many people weren't feeling the name Helen and I'd be open to changing it as well, so if you have any suggestions, she’s all yours.
- The plot is all over the place, jumping from serious, to meme-y, steamy, then backflipping into drama, so I wanted to focus on a big category, them implement the others as secondary genres. I thought of keeping things more light-hearted, keeping to the first chaotic chapters of the first book, but I’d like to know what things kept you reading my story as well: the action, the romantic interactions, a certain character, etc. Any comment helps.
- I know that even if I want to all Director’s cut on this thing, some people might not be very happy with that, so I wanted to ask you if you’d like me to edit the existing chapters, or to post it as a new book and offer a disclaimer in the old one?
- This is not really a request, but more of a “I have 1 neuron working part time” question: since I last used Wattpad, a lot has changed as ads, coins and whatever else were introduced, so I want to ask you guys if you know a way I can post CBS without them, or what would be the easiest way for you to read these chapters. I wish no monetary gain from this, so everything goes.
Sorry for being a boomer, thank you again!
Once again, stay safe, have fun and happy holidays!
Kisses,
Jane
