Janet The Editor

Hello! I was wondering if you could take a look at the first chapter of my story "The Voice of the Siren"? I would love some honest feedback, to make it better. Thank you!

Could you look over my stories and give me some review of input? Thanks! I would really appreciate it! 

Sorry I haven't updated. My account was hacked/lost. P.S this is Jina_The_Wolf using another profile. I'm currently trying to fix it so I can update. Thank you.
          -Jina （・∀・）（・∀・）

http://youtu.be/zpJ8hpBeNvc it's a really cute song about fandoms.  hope u enjoy

I'll be taking over this account but now you can go check out my other siblings accounts if you guys please Janet~

@Jina_The_Wolf Ur welcome sorry for not responding quickly but we're back!

Thanka for the follow! (」ﾟﾛﾟ)｣
          -Jina

Sorry that we haven't been uploading once again, but you can go check out Melanie and Danny is  wattpad for more interesting stuff
          
          
          
          @danny_the_nerd. @melanie_fairy

Sorry we haven't been posting we will real soon though!

Part 2 of Offline will be out soon and if you haven't read part 1 yet go check it out! Thanks guys and good bye!
          
          
                 And also thank you for 20 followers, and if you guys want reply to this telling us a fandom and will make a new fanfic on it
          
          
                  Thanks for reading and Bai!!!