
darian_harding
Honestly I feel privileged to have read The Soccer Player. And the sequel. I shed a few tears. That story was amazing. I loved it. I didn't want Jamie to die, I was waiting for her to pull through and live with Louis forever. But the way you ended it deserves endless applauses. You're an amazing writer who connects with their readers. You should do like and alternative ending where Jamie lives. That would be boss. I'd read it!! Continue writing, and farewell!