JaquiFlotow

I just posted Chapter 2 of my book, Life Outside.  I hope you enjoy it!  I'd love to hear your opinions!

JaquiFlotow

Thank you to every for reading my story! I just realized that somehow I made a huge mistake when I initially posted. I must have been so nervous about posting that I didn't double-check what I was doing. What I  had posted before was actually the very first draft, of the first part of chapter one! I'm still figuring out how to use Wattpad so I hope you'll bear with me as  I learn the program a bit better!
          
          Anyway,  I have updated with the ACTUAL first chapter. I will be posting chapter 2 (for real this time) in the next 48 hours, and hope to have Chapter 3 up by Wednesday! 
          Thanks again!!

my_fairytale

Hey I finally got that chapter up for you, didn't want to leave you hanging! Sorry for the delay :D

my_fairytale

@JaquiFlotow Ohh I never saw your comment until now! What ideas do you have??
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JaquiFlotow

Thanks for letting me know! The new chapter is awesome. I'm curious to see who is behind the attack. I have some ideas but you never know. And it's heart breaking that the attackers were so young!
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my_fairytale

Hey thank you for adding The Sullied Queen to your list, I'd love to hear if you have any recommendations/insights if you begin reading! Have a wonderful night :D

my_fairytale

@JaquiFlotow PS thanks for following me friend :)
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my_fairytale

@JaquiFlotow No of course not! They are encouraging me to write more lol. Yay so glad to hear! Did you notice any plot holes/inconsistencies? I need to re-read it to look for stuff lol, I've written with a lot of breaks so sometimes I forget stuff lol.
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JaquiFlotow

@my_fairytale  I was worried I'd annoy you with too many comments lol. I definitely enjoyed what you have so far. You've created a fascinating world and characters. I love it! Can't wait to read more :) 
            Maybe I shouldn't have read it all in one setting lol
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