JarrynPaige

The idea of a society being told that everything is being done for the “greater good,” only for the protagonist to suddenly find herself on the wrong side of that system really caught my attention. I love stories where the rules and explanations slowly start to feel less trustworthy, especially when the main character realizes that she may be more connected to what's happening than she thought. 👀 I’m writing a slow-burn dystopian mystery myself, so those themes of government control, hidden truths, and questioning what you're being told definitely hit close to home. I’m curious to see where this takes you!

Your posts mention TMBUH but it's not in your list of works. Where would I find it and any other stories you've written.

Hi Jarryn, is it still worth making suggestions on The Carriers, or are you just leaving it as is now?
          I've been making some suggestions, but am considering saving myself the trouble and just reading it.

Gotta say, I’m loving my past self from like five days ago for making myself really get in there and completely remake some chapters.. It’s frustrating, yeah, but there’s something so freeing about actually being proud of my work rather than completely loathing it 

Chapter one (TMBUH) is officially rewritten! The structure is pretty much the same, but the dialogue and notes have been changed pretty drastically (for the better)

Okay, I’m completely rewriting chapter one of The Merry Band of Unfortunate Heroes (Might also change that name). I absolutely abhor the way I introduced Svara and their whole relationship 
          Just gotta throw the whole thing out at this point, ya know? 
          Major details won’t change much don’t worry 

I just finished the Carriers!! It’s been such a long road, but it’s done.. unedited. But done. 
          
          Thank you to everyone that’s supported it! It means the world that even after I lost interest or got discouraged, it still got reads and love.. thank you!

I am also working on finishing up The Carriers. I’ve been feeling really bad lately about being so close to the end of it but just not taking those last couple steps to finish it.. So it shouldn’t be too long before that’s finished!

I’m doing a deep editing of the first few chapters of The Merry Band of Unfortunate Heroes. I wanted to really work out all the kinks and fix any awkward or cringe paragraphs or dialogues; after that I’ll keep on working on newer chapters! 

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