JasminePosey

Soooooooo a bit of an announcement. 
          	
          	My Undertale story is gonna be changed to a Reader-insert, just cuz I've noticed by experience that it's more immersive, and a bit more intriguing. So I changed up the story to make it fit. 
          	
          	I hope you all enjoy ^^

Rox-kun3

Hello JasminePosey. I am Rosie-chan3 but you can call me Rosie for short. I am a reader of A Discorded love and I love to give you some feedback on how I feel about it. And how I don't like the ending of A Discorded love. I will be as nice as possible about this. 
          
          1. You made me fall in love with the world and relationship of the characters to just have it be all a dream.
          
          2. You ruined Discord's growth as a character. To a kind and protective husband and dad and a being who knew how to have a little bit of fun to a possessive husband that was willing to kill some pony over a kiss and hurt Maria in the process of doing so. You gave him no more redeeming traits. 
          
          3. We leave the magical world by Chaos and Random falling off a roof and Maria falling with Random and hitting her head on the ground and waking up in her own world and ending the book like that.
          
          I had accepted that Maria was going to be in the My little Pony world forever but instead you make Discord unlikable and have Maria wake up from a coma and find out it was just a dream. 
          
          I was there for the romance and drama but found  that there was no happy ending. If your going to write a story about romance and drama then you need a happy ending. And I feel that the "It was just a dream" thing is over use. 
          
          That is all, good day.

Rox-kun3

Thank you for understanding my feedback. 
            
            I understand that you were young at the time of writing this book. I myself am a young writer at 14. So I understand the story won't be as good as if you were to rewrite it. But thank you for answering my feedback. Well bye for now and stay Rosie! XD
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JasminePosey

@Rosie-chan3 Thank you for your feedback! Please keep in mind that I originally wrote this when I was 13 and was still quite new to writing. I am 22 now and have gained a better grasp of writing. Coming from experience, not all stories have a happy ending.
            
            In regards to the "dream" ending, the sequel (Hearts as Strong As Chaos), the story actually goes on to *SPOILER* say that it was actually not a dream, and goes on to explain that Maria was sent back to the human world to properly treat the injuries she sustained in the fall.  Again, I was really young, and I just wanted a really dramatic cliffhanger to end the story on. I don't intend to finish this story anytime soon, but there is some content still available for the time being.
            
            Overall, this is a very old story, and there are some things I would change if I were to rewrite it. I don't intend to do so, however, so I'm afraid this story will remain as is. I won't apologize for writing what I felt to be right at the time :)
            
            Please don't misunderstand, I am truly grateful for your feedback. The fact that people are still reading this story years later is mind-blowing to me. I still hope you were able to find some satisfaction in the story as-is. If not, I completely understand. I hope you're able to find a story that is able to meet your tastes
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JasminePosey

Soooooooo a bit of an announcement. 
          
          My Undertale story is gonna be changed to a Reader-insert, just cuz I've noticed by experience that it's more immersive, and a bit more intriguing. So I changed up the story to make it fit. 
          
          I hope you all enjoy ^^

delphoxthechao

hey i found your youtube channel and I commented and you didn't answer so i figured that this the best way to contact you. i just wanted to know if you need any help with ideas or even the audio thing that you wanted to do.
          
          if there is then just let me know on google plus, youtube, or wattpad. :)

delphoxthechao

@JasminePosey no problem I could wait, also I'm wiring my own story I would love it if you checked it out and give me your opinion
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JasminePosey

@delphoxthechao I appreciate it! However, I've decided to set aside those projects for now, at least until I have the time and the tools I need to carry it out. But thanks for offering! ^w^
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JasminePosey

Hey guys! I plan to update stories soon, but as for right now, I'm absolutely exhausted. My drama class has been busy doing performances the past couple of days, and I've been incredibly busy with my performances. 
          
          If you guys are interested, I'm posting most of the performance on my YouTube page! So go check it out! And updates will be coming soon! ^^
          
          -Jasmine

JasminePosey

For those reading "Hearts As Strong As Chaos", this is an important announcement for you! 
          Any expectations you have for the upcoming events, I want you to let them go, because I have a different approach to the plot of the story. Things will get mixed around, changed, and a lot of things might even be deleted. But I promise you won't be disappointed. I've had time to develop my writing, and I have a plan for this story, and the others that I've got on here. So you all should look forward to more frequent and exciting updates, because I know I am :) 
          Thanks to all of you for being patient with me as I get back into my writing, it's been a long process for me, and I truly appreciate it! ^^ 
          -Jasmine