Toto update! Chapter 2, part 5. The brief rewrite is over and finished, so I've removed the "Rewrite" tag on this title, but will keep it on for a little while. I like the new direction a lot and hopefully so do you!
New update! Things are a little different today. I removed the last three part and rewrote them. I didn't like the whole "inspiration" aspect--I think I was channeling too much Hunger Games or something. It has been bugging me since I wrote it, so I figured the best thing would be to just unwrite it. "Kill your darlings!" as Stephen King put it so eloquently. I hope you enjoy! I'm really curious to see who likes the new direction.
Offensive tag? Maybe the Stephen King quote? For those that are curious, it's from his On Writing memoir, telling authors not to be afraid to delete what they wrote.