"The wind is now
a roraing, smashing
monster of destruction,
raking all man's work
from the valleys,
from the vales,
and sends them spinning,
broken flying -
But all of that is
not its core,
its center is in truth
eternal stillness
bright blue skies
and all yowisphers
are gentle wisphers
far away
and unimportant."
~ Dr. Hartmann.
Thank you so much for voting and reading Woven. It means a lot! I was wondering if there's anything you found odd in the book, or anything you think I could improve on.
@su_shhii It's quite the opposite really! I love everything about the book so much, especially the character development and the importance of mental health that you highlight. Can't wait to read more of your work ❤
Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️
"The wind is now
a roraing, smashing
monster of destruction,
raking all man's work
from the valleys,
from the vales,
and sends them spinning,
broken flying -
But all of that is
not its core,
its center is in truth
eternal stillness
bright blue skies
and all yowisphers
are gentle wisphers
far away
and unimportant."
~ Dr. Hartmann.
Me: After a lot of blood and tears had been shed (mid-term exams), the taste of freedom tingling me (no guilt procrastination 24/7 on the internet) feels oh, so sweet.
*sees huge pile of never-ending homework*
Sub-conscience: *snickers* You sure 'bout that, hun?
Me: *without blinking* Positive.
When you think you've finally found a good book after reading the description then- BAM!! You read the first word of the story and it's spelt "Bull-shit". #DisappointmentGameGoingStrong