Jav-SH

"The wind is now
          	 a roraing, smashing
          	 monster of destruction,
          	 raking all man's work
          	 from the valleys,
          	 from the vales,
          	 and sends them spinning,
          	 broken flying -
          	
          	 But all of that is
          	 not its core, 
          	 its center is in truth
          	 eternal stillness
          	 bright blue skies
          	 and all yowisphers 
          	 are gentle wisphers
          	 far away
          	 and unimportant."
          	
          	~ Dr. Hartmann.

sarooshsm

Thank you so much for voting and reading Woven. It means a lot! I was wondering if there's anything you found odd in the book, or anything you think I could improve on.

Jav-SH

@su_shhii It's quite the opposite really! I love everything about the book so much, especially the character development and the importance of mental health that you highlight. Can't wait to read more of your work ❤ 
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

Jav-SH

"The wind is now
           a roraing, smashing
           monster of destruction,
           raking all man's work
           from the valleys,
           from the vales,
           and sends them spinning,
           broken flying -
          
           But all of that is
           not its core, 
           its center is in truth
           eternal stillness
           bright blue skies
           and all yowisphers 
           are gentle wisphers
           far away
           and unimportant."
          
          ~ Dr. Hartmann.

Jav-SH

Me: After a lot of blood and tears had been shed (mid-term exams), the taste of freedom tingling me (no guilt procrastination 24/7 on the internet) feels oh, so sweet.
          
          *sees huge pile of never-ending homework*
          
          Sub-conscience: *snickers* You sure 'bout that, hun?
          
          Me: *without blinking* Positive.