JayJayDea

@ScottT30 Not sure that I'm amazing, but it's a nice thought, lol. I did enjoy Thou Shall Not Kill, and look forward to reading again after you polish it if you decide to. Have a great day.  

JayJayDea

@DavidJThirteen I am very much. I'm not sure how to word what I'm about to say, but I really like how you make me feel as if we are right therewith Denton, figuring out the mystery of Mr.8 right along with him. Even though written in third person it reads, to me at least, very much like a first person point of view. You only see and know what he does, instead of a more wide view. lol like I said don't know how to say it so I'll just stick with I really do like it.

DavidJThirteen

I actually think you said it very well. I believe the technical term for it is limited third person, but that doesn't really explain much. I'm very glad you feel that way, because that is exactly what I was hoping the reader would feel. And I'm happy you're enjoying it :)
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