JayMosque

Feedback time! 
          	Of Ash and Hive is nearing its end. With only about 5 chapters left in the original outline I want to reach out to all of you!
          	
          	What do you think at this point? 
          	Is the plot doing enough?
          	What should I change?
          	
          	Let me know your feedback and thank you!

JayMosque

Feedback time! 
          Of Ash and Hive is nearing its end. With only about 5 chapters left in the original outline I want to reach out to all of you!
          
          What do you think at this point? 
          Is the plot doing enough?
          What should I change?
          
          Let me know your feedback and thank you!