JayVerse

would be nice if somehow I could get help with launching a YouTube channel and turn my Golden Era fanfic into an audio book

LucasEmiya

@JayVerse Jaune (ZZZ, STAR RAIL, GENSHIN IMPACT, Tears of Themis. Honkai Impact 3rd)  Jaune Arc a young traveler, a tracer, a proxy, a hunter, a young officer, an adventurer, among many things; as a young man despised by many, being the shadow of his family and relatives, he was not given a chance .. except for his grandfather who not only trained him but took him around the world on many trips; then when he is expelled from Beacon, he decides to return to his life of adventures .. 2 years and 6 months pass ... and strange screens are shown all over the world (and not just in Remnant) now you will see the adventures and misadventures of our friend (especially when many girls and women see their "interest" / "love" / etc etc) who has embarked on his own adventure ... especially by a group of "sisters" who see again ......
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Fabian_JCZ700

Question
          
          Could you do a story about Weiss returning to the past?
          
          It would be great to see an adult Weiss transported back in time along with the journal of Whitley Schnee (her younger brother), who committed suicide (because his family's problems led him to that point).
          
          Now, as an adult, Weiss travels back in time and convinces herself that she must prevent her younger brother's death (since afterward, Weiss lives with the regret of Whitley's death and blames herself for it...as do Winter and Willow).
          
          But after reading her brother's journal (which she finds with her), she realizes that her brother's death is more complicated.
          
          Let me explain:
          
          In that universe, Whitley is a "spy" in the Salem group (which he joined thanks to Arthur Watts) and gathers information and sends it "anonymously" to Ozpin.
          
          What do you think?
          
          
          ( I translated the previous request into English)

Fabian_JCZ700

Pregunta 
          
          Podrías hacer una historia de Weiss devuelta al pasado?
          
          Es que sería genial ver a una Weiss adulta transportada al pasado  junto con el diario de Whitley Schnee (su hermano menor) el cuál se suicidó ( porque los problemas de su familia lo llevaron a ese punto)
          
          Ahora Weiss adulta viaja al pasado  y está se convence a si misma de que debe evitar la muerte de su hermano menor ( ya que después de ello Weiss vive con el arrepentimiento de la muerte de Whitley y se culpa por ello....cómo también Winter y Willow) 
          
          Pero tras leer el diario de su hermano ( el cuál aparece con ella) se da cuenta que la muerte de su hermano es más complicada.
          
          
          Me explico:
          
          En ese universo Whitley es un "espía" en el grupo de Salem ( el cuál entró gracias a Arthur Watts)  y recopila información y la envía de manera "anónima" a Ozpin.
          
          
          Que opinas?

Fabian_JCZ700

Hola
          
          Te escribo para decirte que me gustó mucho tu historia de Jaune Arc "Golde era" : )

Fabian_JCZ700

@ AJHamilton567  me gustó mucho la parte de la "guerra de comida" (Jaune vs Ren) : )
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JayVerse

@Fabian_JCZ700 muchas gracias, amigo
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JayVerse

would be nice if somehow I could get help with launching a YouTube channel and turn my Golden Era fanfic into an audio book

LucasEmiya

@JayVerse Jaune (ZZZ, STAR RAIL, GENSHIN IMPACT, Tears of Themis. Honkai Impact 3rd)  Jaune Arc a young traveler, a tracer, a proxy, a hunter, a young officer, an adventurer, among many things; as a young man despised by many, being the shadow of his family and relatives, he was not given a chance .. except for his grandfather who not only trained him but took him around the world on many trips; then when he is expelled from Beacon, he decides to return to his life of adventures .. 2 years and 6 months pass ... and strange screens are shown all over the world (and not just in Remnant) now you will see the adventures and misadventures of our friend (especially when many girls and women see their "interest" / "love" / etc etc) who has embarked on his own adventure ... especially by a group of "sisters" who see again ......
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JayVerse

Alright guys, what are your feedbacks so far with my new story " Argus Police Department: Jaune Arc"? 
          
          And don't worry, I will try and update my other stories, even my very first one. It's just that things are a bit hectic on my end and a busy schedule that I have to juggle with. I'm thinking that maybe just maybe I would start a YouTube channel where these fanfics would be turned into audio books. No promises.
          
          But in regards to my new story that I am working with, as you can see It is based on a previously published work by another user, however I took the concept and remaster it then try to build something creative with it.
          
          Even though the MC is our favorite blonde, I am trying to build it in a way the supporting cast can have screen time as well.
          
          Also, being that this is an alternative reality. I'm going to take Liberty at Modifying the RWBY lore where the story calls for it and give it a more creative twist. Certain elements will remain the same such as, you know, the war between Salem and Ozma, but you won't be seeing any of that anytime too soon. But it will be there. Just delivered to you in a different fashion.

CarlosCaldern101

Hey My guy, you mentioned about doing a Collab story, not really sure how that would work, and also not really sure I could be of any use tbh... My anime/manga/comics/books knowledge is not top notch lol... So I guess I would want to know what you had in mind before deciding if I want to go for it or not

JayVerse

@CarlosCaldern101 okay let's work with that. I'm also against using OC unnecessarily. What I was thinking, when Jason entered the new world, his memories would be whipped. But his personality, training, battle instincts, an intellect would be combined with Naruto's. For example, Naruto would somehow through instinct know how to craft a pistol from his past life using materials from this world for example
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CarlosCaldern101

@ CarlosCaldern101  sounds interesting. I think Jason should be reincarnated right from Naruto's birth, that way he has time to get used to the world and it's mechanics, as they are highly different from DC's. That being said, this would very well diverge from canon almost entirely, however, I wouldn't want to add OC's or anything of the such. If you noticed on my Naruto clones story, I kept all original arcs and most of the fights, so in this case I would want to do the same. 
            
            How would the writing work? I only have one finished story, and I am in the process of a second one, so I'm not really sure how these collabs actually work. 
            
            Also, I have next to zero understanding of Jason's personality and motivations, lol
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JayVerse

@CarlosCaldern101 aight fam, since you have a decent understanding of Naruto here's the idea.
            
            How about a Naruto story were you have Jason Todd (Red Hood) died after a heroic sacrifice in taking down a Joker possessed superman. (Alternate Reality). So what happen is that after he dies he meets the specter and sage of six paths who offered him a chance at a new life. Jason reincarnated as Naruto and take his place. 
            *(The reincarnation could take place within the first 3 months of his training trip with Jiraya or shortly before wave mission)
            
            *(This won't be a dark fic but something filled with action, cannon divergence and and hell a lot of stuff)
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JayVerse

Now that we have officially hit 10 chapters, along with a couple fillers in between for Golden Era: The Return of A Fallen Knight, I want to hear your reviews and feedback about this story so far. 
          
          
          Also, DM me some suggestions about the direction of the plot.

JayVerse

@foxkage9 aight fam
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foxkage9

@AJHamilton567 bro this book is fire. Cant wait to see what comes of the plot. I wish this was cannon.
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