Jay_Utopia

Important announcement down below in case ya missed it!

Jay_Utopia

I have finished the (extensive) second draft for Chapter 1, and the word count has totaled to over 5,500, so yeah, it’s gonna be a long one.
          
          I have no idea when the release date is gonna be. I originally thought I’d finish this by late February, but, I was wrong. Idealistically, I’ll finish the first part and start posting chapters late 2022, but who knows.
          
          In the meantime, I would really love some outside opinions on the current draft. 
          
          Perks: you get to read the second, more refined draft of each chapter and help give me some constructive criticism on the story elements, and you get to talk to me directly. 
          Cons: if you leak anything from the chapter, the FBI come for you :)
          
          If you’d like to be one of these proofreaders, then please go ahead and message me, I’d really appreciate your help. I would prefer people who have either written fanfics or have read enough to tell what is or is not a good story.
          
          Much obliged ;)

LocalArsonist13

@Jay_Utopia I'd love to help out, if you need it still.
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Jay_Utopia

I have unpublished all but one of the original ODDH’s Chapters. The remake has a ton of differences from the original fanfic, but a lot of the core elements remain the same, so I want the story to feel more fresh I guess. (Also I’m slightly embarrassed by some of my original writing choices so yeah)

IzuochaAddict

@Jay_Utopia Omg, I'm glad I wasn't that deep in the fanfic yet
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KarmasABitch201

 every time you post one I get a notification and it’s so funny cause it’s like pop pop pop pop pop pop

KarmasABitch201

@RealJayUtopia39  all good it was so funny 
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Jay_Utopia

Pfft sorry I had unpublished the story and someone asked for me to republish it ;D
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KarmasABitch201

*post a chapter
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Mello_Coco

Hello! May I ask you if you deleted "old dreams die hard"? 
          
          I can't find it anywhere :/
          
          If you deleted it, pls repost it (even if you don't want to continue it). It was one of the best villain deku stories. And I would love to read again some chapters.

Mello_Coco

@ RealJayUtopia39  thank you! I liked it so much, I was scared that you deleted it 
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Jay_Utopia

@Mello_Coco I didn't delete it, I just unpublished it. I'll repost it
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