The "Know–It–All"

I just reread my story "all×jay kidnapped". 
          
          And...I just wanted to...slam my phone on the floor. I cringed so hard. 
          
          I also read that Jay—Sunghoon part, yk...that one part.
          
          I don't know what I wrote and...I also don't know how y'all didn't hate on that chp or even that one specific part. Or how y'all didn't even say anything in the comments either. 
          
          I feel so stupid and...idk cringe...even though it was my first story. 
          
          Also, I noticed my writing style in this story is so annoying and immature. 
          
          I'm really sorry 
          
          Idk how y'all endured it till the end.
          
          

@Jellyfishkiko ❤️

@Jellyfishkiko thankyou so much for reading and liking my story. I'll be writing more stories in the future. I hope you read and like them, too.