JaydenMelbom

So, I've recently written a bunch of short stories revolving around the same sort of themes of heartbreak and love, and I would really appreciate it if anyone had the time to read the first part. I think it's some of my best work so far, and it would just be great to get any feedback for it as it's been hard to find that as of late. Thank you if you did manage to take a look!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/127085567

JaydenMelbom

So, I've recently written a bunch of short stories revolving around the same sort of themes of heartbreak and love, and I would really appreciate it if anyone had the time to read the first part. I think it's some of my best work so far, and it would just be great to get any feedback for it as it's been hard to find that as of late. Thank you if you did manage to take a look!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/127085567

JaydenMelbom

I have completed a new cover! It took me about three hours but I finally did it, and if anyone likes it please let me know because I don't know if I went to overboard with it! I also used many new effects I have never even known of before so thats why I am slightly concerned xD