Jayden Melbom

So, I've recently written a bunch of short stories revolving around the same sort of themes of heartbreak and love, and I would really appreciate it if anyone had the time to read the first part. I think it's some of my best work so far, and it would just be great to get any feedback for it as it's been hard to find that as of late. Thank you if you did manage to take a look!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/127085567

Will be posting Updates to my story, "Fly", every Monday from here on out. I live in Australia so it's Sunday here, so that means I'll be posting it tomorrow. Just in case anybody wanted to know.

Come back to ys, and continue your stories

Thanks for the follow :) 

Thanks for the follow. :)

Hey friend, thanks for the follow! :) 
          I saw you around on a couple of the forums the other day, nice to meet you!

Hey mate,
          Thanks for the follow, it means a lot. Also, I just read your bio and if those are the types of stories you like I think you might really like my book :)

Thank you for following!  I'll check out your book after school.

Thanks for the follow. Don't know if it is your type of story, but Sky Pirates has loads of characters which you sais you liked. Shameless advertising, I know, but thought you might be interested. =)

Thanks for the follow! Happy reading and writing!