JayfeathersStick11

Also i have decided ima be writing a fantasy book! ( not warriors ) im putting a break to the warriors books for now but if any updates happen ill tell u :D have  blessed day <3

JayfeathersStick11

also, anyone have suggestions for chapter three? so far GoldenBriar has had a "Friend" and ShayPaw had been weared out by him. And VelvetPaw is VelvetPaw, XD so anything would be nice. i feel  like i need chapters that don't bounce around the current thing that happened, like goldenbriar went on patrol , shaypaw jsut came back from that patrol. I HOPE I MAKE SENSE AND DONT MINE MY GRAMMAR IM TOO TIRED RN. ;-;

JayfeathersStick11

help idk if this is a good thing to put in my book or if it is jsut plain stupid PLEASE HELP XDDD no but ifeel like its stupid 
          
          "Yeah, have you noticed that they have been more inseparable than a tick on an elders tail?"  HELP IM DYING XDD idk why but i am

JayfeathersStick11

tysm!!!!! yall are so supportive <3
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SunnyD4y5

@JayfeathersStick11 NOOO THATS PERFECT!!!
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Dove-Writes

@JayfeathersStick11 That’s a funny line!’m! Definitely don’t remove it
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JayfeathersStick11

So uhm my wattpad servers just crashed and i jsut realized I have already made the proloug but didn't post it! so if theres and option i might take down the first chapter so yall get some background knowledge. (Not that there is much in the prolouge )

JayfeathersStick11

yep i totally forgot to change that!
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HereIAmfr

@JayfeathersStick11 BTW THE COVER IS GORGEOUS!! ( and i think moonshine_writez switched accounts im not sure tho )
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HereIAmfr

@JayfeathersStick11 oop mb ive been occupied but ill start reading it now!!
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JayfeathersStick11

Okay so there is gonna be a little bit of a hold up on the book. I keep deleting everything bc i think it isnt good enough. This is my first book im writing so if it isnt the best book thats why-

JayfeathersStick11

oh my gosh that would be horrible if that happened thanks for tellng me! also thank you your so kind :D
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HereIAmfr

@JayfeathersStick11 of course can't wait to see what you send out-- i'll be commenting and voting and reading every chapter no matter how long it takes-- just as a side note, wattpad has been deleting a couple of warrior cat stories from people i follow, so it would be a good idea to have it in docs or something else as well
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JayfeathersStick11

@HereIAmfr aw ty! i have finally started the first chapter with something i like! i might just send out my book and update each chapter.
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