Hey, I was reading 'they called it Love' and I saw that you said, "im starting to think i should end this story...'
Well, don't. I think your a taleted writer and all you need is to KEEP writing so you can improve your writing! Trust me, I was in your position once bt I kept writing. My writing skills improved A LOT! I have more fans, but not a lot. I'm still working on my writing to attract more readers. Overall, i'm trying to say is your a talented writer and whatever u do, DONT GIVE UP! (: