Jazmine421

I took STSBKS down because I was not satisfied with the story. I'm doing a rewrite. I'm not completely changing the story but after re reading it, I realized the story lacked detail. I had a hard time figuring out how Jazmine felt so I decided to add more of what she would feel. Also I changed the title and the cover. I'm debating on whether I should put the chapter out as I edit but I'm still not sure. You guys let me know what you think. None of the characters have changed and it's still the same story. It just has much more detail. I think you'll like it when it's finished.

Jazmine421

I took STSBKS down because I was not satisfied with the story. I'm doing a rewrite. I'm not completely changing the story but after re reading it, I realized the story lacked detail. I had a hard time figuring out how Jazmine felt so I decided to add more of what she would feel. Also I changed the title and the cover. I'm debating on whether I should put the chapter out as I edit but I'm still not sure. You guys let me know what you think. None of the characters have changed and it's still the same story. It just has much more detail. I think you'll like it when it's finished.

Jazmine421

Okay, so I finally finished editing STSBKS. Like I said before not much has changed. I added a few things here and there and deleted a lot of stuff that were unnecessary in the story. I started that story when I was 16 and I could tell by my writing that I had no clue what I was doing but I'm getting better so the story should be getting better as well. I'm still trying to figure out what to do with the story but we're getting there. Like I said if you have any questions please feel free to message me anytime.

Jazmine421

Alright guys. First of all hey. Second, you may be seeing a lot of notification saying that the STSBKS is updating. Sorry to tell you it's not. I'm editing a couple things. Nothing in the story really has changed I just realized that some parts of the story sucked and I made a couple of mistakes that are fixed. I also cleared up some confusion that you guys brought to me attention. So thank you guys  for that. Still having trouble writing due to the inconvenience of time but I'm trying guys. I'm going to be up for 24 hours so if you have any questions now would be the time to ask. As for whether a new part will be up that's a big maybe. So we'll see. Thanks guys for sticking with me and be safe. -Jazmine

Jazmine421

@Princesslovely444 thanks for the compliment. I will definitely try to get a story to you soon.
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Jazmine421

@Princesslovely444 keep holding on okay, I'm trying to make time for the story so fingers crossed these people give me some time off.
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Jazmine421

okay I'm getting a bunch of messages about stsbks & I should probably tell you guys why it's gonna be awhile before I update. so back in June I decided to join the army. yeah I know it's crazy but I joined and I left for training June ninth and I haven't been home since. I don't have any and I mean ANY time for writing because I'm studying to become and pharmacy tech and I have my duties and responsibilities to attend to and that literally takes up ALL OF MY TIME. I'm sorry that you guys have to wait but I have to be a soldier before anything else. If you have any questions when I have time I'll reply to every single one. I love you guys so much and I'm glad you guys like they story. the story WILL be finished just not as soon as most of you would like. peace & blessings Jazmine421
          
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