Jazt055

I want the story to continue man I was loving it

Yooo

Who still here?

Do y’all still want a update?

You good bro?
          

Can i adopt this book???

I’m here to check up on you how are you doing?

Hello I was wondering if you are still working on your Naruto book? Love your story 

Who are the people in your background also who’s the person in your pfp?

Hello jazt (I'm lazy sorry) 
          
          I really liked your book and where is going currently 
          
           Imma be a little blunt here and give feedback 
          
           I think I found a few minor problems like spelling and need for stream lining some text here and there since it's 'choppy' so to speak
          
          And a few skills not being used as often as I think they should be (just my thought on this bit) 
          
          Otherwise it's a good book  but it would be a bit easier to read if you stream lined the text a little to keep it for being 'choppy' or 'jumpy' as mentioned above in other  chapters which I have noticed you do a bit on important parts..each writer has there own style I'm just asking if you would think on it and consider it..you don't have to do it..