Jazt055

I want the story to continue man I was loving it

Yooo

Who still here?

Do y’all still want a update?

You good bro?
          

Can i adopt this book???

Hello I was wondering if you are still working on your Naruto book? Love your story 

@dguiry Daki and Gyutaro from demon slayer

Hello jazt (I'm lazy sorry) 
          
          I really liked your book and where is going currently 
          
           Imma be a little blunt here and give feedback 
          
           I think I found a few minor problems like spelling and need for stream lining some text here and there since it's 'choppy' so to speak
          
          And a few skills not being used as often as I think they should be (just my thought on this bit) 
          
          Otherwise it's a good book  but it would be a bit easier to read if you stream lined the text a little to keep it for being 'choppy' or 'jumpy' as mentioned above in other  chapters which I have noticed you do a bit on important parts..each writer has there own style I'm just asking if you would think on it and consider it..you don't have to do it..