Jazzimay94

I’ve been thinking about it for a while and I’m thinking of un publishing all of my stories. It’s been hard trading in between writing in here and on episode so my stories will be unpublished in this app by the end of this month.

essefjay5153

I enjoyed the story of Dominic and his Luna. The story is well written and it reads well. However, in order to polish the story in preparation for publishing, some of your vocabulary choices were due to issues with word choice and word meaning. English is a difficult language to learn and use because of the rules of  semantics, syntax, morphology and spelling. 
          
          Why am I telling you this in love? You have talent and a good work ethic.
          
           I want to see you authoring all kinds of books. I want to see your name and  work on the New York's best author list. I want to read more of your work. 
          
          Girl, you know how to construct the story and tell it very well. Many authors can't do that. You are imaginative and can create the drama inside the story.
          
          You are so good!  Think about what I have said! Your greatness and financial success "is less than 3 feet away".
          
          What is the name of Dominic's sequel?

Jazzimay94

I’ve been thinking about it for a while and I’m thinking of un publishing all of my stories. It’s been hard trading in between writing in here and on episode so my stories will be unpublished in this app by the end of this month.

Jazzimay94

Alright, guys! Only one more chapter left and that's it for GPA! Chapter 41 is out!!! Thanks for being with me in reading my first story! Hope you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing it. The story will continue and there will be a sneak peek of it so stay tuned!