JazzyDiamonds

@CakexCakexCake Thank you for your comments 

CakexCakexCake

I like your story Heat and Boiling point but the way the timeline goes is weird. One minute, Mickayla is 1, then she's 4, then she's fourteen, then she's 16.
          Also, the years passed yet the topic was still going on like it happened yesterday. I understand you were trying to keep things older so you could get to the ending quicker, but it could have been longer so you wouldn't have to skip time so fast. Overall, good story. Could use editing but good :3