Jc Gatlin

Hey there! 
          
          I've seen you around and I don't want to seem like too much of a hassle but could you check out my story? It's my first story and I really want to improve as a writer but I don't know how so don't be afraid to be a little harsh with your comments :X

Hey Danke. Sure. I'll take a look.

Thank you for following me!

Thanks for the follow back--I'm immensely honoured :)

Hey, your critique is posted and on my page- go ahead and tell me what you think.
          -Chris

Thanks for following JC. Hope your weekend's goin well.

Congrats on winning another contest.  You deserve it.

Thanks for the information.  I'll do that.

@deancmoore Thank you! 

@Fakedeadgirlfriend Yes it's another monthly contest. They give you a score on several categories, including plot, dialogue, descriptions, etc. You should enter your Office short story.