Jcatherine12

Hi! Could you comment on my story Final Light: The Last Hope?
          
          The story starts as a world with magic and technology as darkness and shadows rules the world. And the people of the floating island is hoping for someone of the "light" to save them all.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/973725-final-light-the-last-hope
          
          Thank you so very much!